Original Ottoman Turkish Text
Metre: fā‘ilātün fā‘ilātün fā‘ilün
Hey diseydi ġamze-i cādūsına
El ṣunardum sünbül-i gīsūsına
Her ne deñlü ṭāḳ-ı çarḫ ise yiri
Māh-ı ‘īd irmez hilāl ebrūsına
In English
1. If (the beloved) had said "hey" to her sorcerous glance (if she had held it back), I would have stretched out my hand to her hyacinth-like locks. However high the arch of heaven may be as its place, the festival new moon cannot reach her crescent eyebrow. (For the first line see the commentary.)
Literary and Historical Commentary
Structure of the Poem
The poem is a four-line tuyugh; in the edition it is the seventeenth of the tuyughs (tyğ 17). The metre is "fā‘ilātün fā‘ilātün fā‘ilün". The rhyme is the sound "-ūsına": cādūsına, gīsūsına, ebrūsına; the third line ("yiri") is unrhymed. The quatrain is found in all three manuscripts (VT 178b, VY 150a, Ü 63a). It is not known for whom or when it was written.
Meaning and Figures of Speech
The Kubbealtı gives "câdû" the senses witch and very beautiful, large eye, and lists examples for the phrase "gamze-i câdû" (sorcerous glance). "Gîsû" in the same dictionary is long hair falling to the shoulders. The first two lines form a conditional sentence: had the beloved said "hey" to her sorcerous glance, the lover could have stretched his hand to her locks. We have understood "hey dimek" as checking the glance, rebuking it; exactly what the interjection means here is not certain. Because the glance bewitches the lover and holds him in place, he cannot reach for the hair (our reading).
The last two lines set up a comparison between the sky and the eyebrow. The Kubbealtı gives "tak" the senses arch and dome, and "çarh" the senses sky and the celestial sphere; "hilâl-i îd" is the moon seen at the festival. "Ebrû" means eyebrow. The arch of heaven, the crescent and the eyebrow are linked by their arched shapes; this is a congruence of images (tenasüp). Even if the festival crescent stands at the highest point of the sky, it cannot reach the beloved's crescent brow; the crescent that people watch for comes second beside the beloved's eyebrow.
Bibliography
Primary sources
- Ersen Ersoy (ed.), II. Bayezit Devri Şairlerinden Münîrî ve Dîvânı (İnceleme-Metin), Ankara: Ministry of Culture and Tourism Publications, 2017 (e-book), p. 384, tyğ 17 (introduction pp. 7-8, 15-18). https://ekitap.ktb.gov.tr/Eklenti/56095,muniri-divanipdf.pdf (archived copy: https://web.archive.org/web/20220803084052/https://ekitap.ktb.gov.tr/Eklenti/56095,muniri-divanipdf.pdf?0)
Academic studies
- Nihat Öztoprak, "Tuyuğ", TDV İslâm Ansiklopedisi, vol. 41, İstanbul 2012, pp. 450-451. https://islamansiklopedisi.org.tr/tuyug
Books
- Kubbealtı Lugatı (Misalli Büyük Türkçe Sözlük), entries "câdû", "gîsû", "tak", "çarh – çerh", "hilâl" and "ebrû". https://lugatim.com/s/câdû
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