Original Ottoman Turkish Text

Metre: fā‘ilātün fā‘ilātün fā‘ilün

Bāġ-ı ḥüsnüñ kim cihān bostānıdur
Ṣaçlaruñ rūḥānīler reyḥānıdur
Gül-şen-i ḥüsnüñüñ ey cān bülbüli
Dil daḫı murġ-ı hezār-elḥānıdur

In English

1. In the garden of your beauty, which is the orchard of the world, your locks are the sweet basil of the spiritual beings. O beloved (cān), the heart too, the nightingale of the rose garden of your beauty, is a bird of a thousand melodies. (The third line can also be read as "O nightingale of the soul"; see the commentary.)

Literary and Historical Commentary

Structure of the Poem

The poem is a four-line tuyugh; in the edition it is the eleventh of the tuyughs (tyğ 11). The metre is "fā‘ilātün fā‘ilātün fā‘ilün". The rhyme is the sound "-ānı" and the redif is the suffix "-dur" (is): bostānıdur, reyḥānıdur, hezār-elḥānıdur; the third line ("bülbüli") is unrhymed. The quatrain is found in all three manuscripts (VT 178a, VY 149b, Ü 62a). It is not known for whom or when it was written.

Meaning and Figures of Speech

The quatrain is built from beginning to end out of garden words: bāġ (garden), bostān (orchard), reyḥān (sweet basil), gül-şen (rose garden), bülbül (nightingale) and murġ (bird). The Kubbealtı explains "reyhan" as sweet basil. The beloved's beauty is a garden that is the orchard of the world; her locks are the basil of this garden, and spiritual beings breathe its scent. Likening hair to a fragrant herb brings to mind both the sweet scent of the hair and its resemblance to curling green leaves.

"Murġ-ı hezār-elḥān" in the last line means a bird of a thousand melodies. The Kubbealtı gives "hezar" on the one hand the sense "thousand" and on the other the sense "nightingale". Here the word is used as a number in the phrase "a thousand melodies", but together with the word "bülbül" just above it, it also recalls the nightingale; this is a double entendre (tevriye). The syntax of the third line can be built in two ways: if "ey cān" is taken as an address to the beloved, the heart is the nightingale of beauty's rose garden; if "cān bülbüli" is taken as a phrase, the beloved is called "nightingale of the soul". In the translation we have followed the first reading.

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