Original Ottoman Turkish Text
Metre: fā‘ilātün fā‘ilātün fā‘ilün
Ruḫlaruñ kim bāġ-ı cān gül-zārıdur
Ṣad hezārān bülbül ü gül zārīdür
Bülbül-i dil-ḫasteñi unutma kim
Dem-be-dem ḫār-ı belā bīmārıdur
In English
1. Your cheeks, which are the rose garden of the garden of the soul: hundreds of thousands of nightingales and roses are weeping and lamenting for them. Do not forget your heart-sick nightingale; every moment he is sick from the thorn of affliction.
Literary and Historical Commentary
Structure of the Poem
The poem is a four-line tuyugh; in the edition it is the twelfth of the tuyughs (tyğ 12). The metre is "fā‘ilātün fā‘ilātün fā‘ilün". The rhyme words are "gül-zārıdur", "zārīdür" and "bīmārıdur"; the third line ("kim") is unrhymed. The quatrain is found in all three manuscripts (VT 178a, VY 149b, Ü 62b). Like the previous tuyugh, this quatrain too is built on the image of the nightingale and the rose garden. It is not known for whom or when it was written.
Meaning and Figures of Speech
The pun of the tuyugh is at the end of the first two lines. The first line ends "gül-zārıdur" (is the rose garden), the second "gül zārīdür" (the rose is lamenting). The Kubbealtı explains "gülzar" as rose garden and "zârî" as weeping, lamenting. The two phrases are built from the same sounds, but one is the name of a place and the other a lament; this is a clear example of the punning rhyme that the TDV notes for the tuyugh.
"Hezārān" in the second line also has two senses. The Kubbealtı gives "hezâran" both the sense "thousands" and the sense "nightingales". In the phrase "ṣad hezārān bülbül" the word expresses a number, but together with "bülbül" next to it, it also calls up the nightingale. In the last two lines the lover names himself as the wounded nightingale in the beloved's garden; the rose's thorn (ḫār) has turned into affliction, and the nightingale is sick from this thorn every moment. The congruence of images (tenasüp) among rose, thorn and nightingale makes the quatrain a whole.
Bibliography
Primary sources
- Ersen Ersoy (ed.), II. Bayezit Devri Şairlerinden Münîrî ve Dîvânı (İnceleme-Metin), Ankara: Ministry of Culture and Tourism Publications, 2017 (e-book), p. 383, tyğ 12 (introduction pp. 7-8, 15-18). https://ekitap.ktb.gov.tr/Eklenti/56095,muniri-divanipdf.pdf (archived copy: https://web.archive.org/web/20220803084052/https://ekitap.ktb.gov.tr/Eklenti/56095,muniri-divanipdf.pdf?0)
Academic studies
- Nihat Öztoprak, "Tuyuğ", TDV İslâm Ansiklopedisi, vol. 41, İstanbul 2012, pp. 450-451. https://islamansiklopedisi.org.tr/tuyug
Books
- Kubbealtı Lugatı (Misalli Büyük Türkçe Sözlük), entries "gülzar", "zârî" and "hezar". https://lugatim.com/s/zârî
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